Wattpad Project – Poison Princess

I wrote and posted the next part of the prologue to the wattpad project. I am feeling quite good about this so far. Then again I suppose that happens to almost every writer. They feel really good when they begin, but as they get deeper into the story the mud thickens in their words and each sentence feels like a battle. Then the end closes in and the easy thrill picks up again. Or is that just me?

https://www.wattpad.com/story/213695523-poison-princess

Again, I welcome any feedback. I am still learning, this is about progression as well as success.